tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17161329.post9220864238726085462..comments2023-11-02T01:18:40.124-07:00Comments on O MACHINE: LukeBuckhamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11638459373086007564noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17161329.post-21848296651384306572010-07-12T09:44:31.116-07:002010-07-12T09:44:31.116-07:00Thank you for reading, Peter. I'll stop by yo...Thank you for reading, Peter. I'll stop by your place for a look.<br /><br />I don't recall that particular piece by Uluard--the only time I've read him was in a few translations by Beckett, which I enjoyed--but I'll look for the Leda suite now that you brought it up.<br /><br />cheers<br /><br />LukeLukeBuckhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11638459373086007564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17161329.post-14673414377868191332010-07-08T12:45:37.963-07:002010-07-08T12:45:37.963-07:00"Pair upon pair of lips"?
I suspect you&..."Pair upon pair of lips"?<br />I suspect you're somewhat inspired by Paul Eluards's Leda suite. May trhis be so, or is it just coincidence?<br /><br />Anyhow, your poem is rather good. I feel some turns could be a little bit nore vivid and specific for a complete finish.<br /><br />I have written quite a lot of love poetry myself. Have a look into my Sonnets for Katie on Singleswingle.<br /><br /><a href="http://singleswingle.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">My Poems</a><br /><br />And my art for a bonus:<br /><br /><a href="http://screenfonds.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Weathertime Wallpaper Windows</a><br /><br />I feel I have a good product to advertise, and you will dpo me a FAVOR promoting your blogs on mine i return. Please check My Prifile for, I hope, more interesting stuff.<br /><br />Yours,<br />Peter Ingestad, SwedenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com